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Singing such a haunting melody
In a voice steeped in endless intrigue
Playing coy and drawing you in
Calling her Ravens to cut off your retreat
Closing in, her talons raised
Provocative smile to sup on your soul


Only a song
Melodies unheard
Just enough to tame her darkness
More than enough to bring her back
Curious
Who is this man


Sharing the Owl's knowing eyes
A stoic sentinel with feathered hair
His voice a honeyed razor
Cutting the darkness
Ensnaring her emotion
A bond is formed


Now a steadfast ally
His blade is hers
If only she will control her darkness
Accepting his light in repose
A proud adviser to his Lady of Ravens
A valued comrade to her Owl in the Dusk

©A. DeMario 2012
A little something dedicated to someone I deeply respect. You know who you are. The title should be a dead giveaway lol.
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cdmb Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your amazing love ya
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PaladinEclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Full of imagery, beauty, darkness... Absolutely splendid. I love your writing, it's amazing. :)
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cdmb Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yeah he is great at capturing people
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. That means a lot.
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PaladinEclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Very fine writing! Strong imagery in your bird characters. I love the way the poem weaves itself around itself.
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really? Thanks so much.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
I think it's one of your best. And you're very welcome.
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dreamingshadow18 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think I turned a little red at that lol. Thank you.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012
Welcome!You are a good poet, I hope you know that.
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