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An infernal mist hangs heavily upon my brain.
I long to awaken deeply-embedded thoughts sleeping in a soundless void
But no matter.
Blindly provoking joyful delusions works only as effectively as I can shape my dreams
Lucid, but not fully apparent
Indecision smothers assertion under a veil of uncertainty
How long must this indirect manipulation continue?
With time and hardened resolve, I may find the answer before I discover the solution.
Making sense of hidden intrigue is a lost art within itself.
I'll give only my strongest effort to burn away the clinging confusion
Concealing brittle truths
Because it's correct;  Because it's beautiful;
Because only I control the the alluring madness within

©A. DeMario 2012
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A little something written to counteract the writer's block
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~ZilonD Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great poem as always nice work :)... If I dare to read in to it a bit might this poem be a question asked to yourself and in the meantimealso the answer?
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Mood: Sociable ~dreamingshadow18 Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much. I think all sorts of different meanings could be drawn from this one.
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~ZilonD Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Youre welcome... I forgot to fave xD
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~heartbroken42109 Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
hmmm. i like it, but it just leads to questions.
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Mood: Joy ~dreamingshadow18 Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe that's my intent lol. It's about creativity. Something that is both beloved and misunderstood.
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*GUDRUN355 Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the lines: "I may find the answer before I discover the solution." I actually like the whole poem.
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Mood: Joy ~dreamingshadow18 Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. That's an older one of my pieces. Glad you like it.
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Mood: Joy *GUDRUN355 Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome.
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~cdmb Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep posting it now
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~cdmb Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yep I'm definately posting this
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